Hi everyone!
Last year, I was on holiday with my family, in Paris, France. When we arrived, we went to the hotel. Our room was very nice, because it was warm and very decorated. After that we went to the Louvre musem. We saw the Gioconda. It was awesome. Then, we ate at an expensive restaurant. The next day, we visited Disneyland. I took a lot of photos. I loved Disneyland! It was amazing, but there were a lot of people waiting for the rides. I hope I go back soon.

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